tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post564758616057430056..comments2024-03-28T12:43:12.893+05:30Comments on सिताब दियारा : शेषनारायण मिश्र की कवितायें रामजी तिवारी http://www.blogger.com/profile/03037493398258910737noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-28080381973117243102013-10-03T05:56:48.796+05:302013-10-03T05:56:48.796+05:30I'm a regular visitor of this blog (sitabdiyar...I'm a regular visitor of this blog (sitabdiyara) but I didn't find anyone till now<br />having this much talent. Every line is totally meaningful, perfectly clear and most importantly having accurate flow of poetry (important B'coz today most of the poets are not able to make it possible so they starts writing "Chhandmukta" poems)<br /><br />Well Fantastic Mr. Sheshnarayan Mishra ji....<br /><br />And Thanx Ramji Tiwari sir for giving us<br />opportunity to read such some great poetry of a fresher poet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14080021609421461473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-5866834026177824122013-10-03T05:34:02.861+05:302013-10-03T05:34:02.861+05:30इस टिप्पणी को लेखक द्वारा हटा दिया गया है.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14080021609421461473noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-73049144066133784022013-09-14T17:57:53.403+05:302013-09-14T17:57:53.403+05:30तीनों ही रचना गज़लनुमा अंदाज़ में हैं | अच्छा लगा ...तीनों ही रचना गज़लनुमा अंदाज़ में हैं | अच्छा लगा पढ़कर | कवि मित्र को बधाई ....ब्लॉग का आभार <br />-नित्यानंद गायेन <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-48031932589201813302013-09-13T18:00:37.790+05:302013-09-13T18:00:37.790+05:30bhookhi janta ke paison se chhalak rahe peris ke j...bhookhi janta ke paison se chhalak rahe peris ke jaam<br /><br />waah kya baat hai bhai sahab<br />abhishek dubeynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-11342621361345204342013-09-13T17:31:51.925+05:302013-09-13T17:31:51.925+05:30
ek jagah shayad typing mistake hai
kavita 2 m...<br /><br /><br /> ek jagah shayad typing mistake hai<br />kavita 2 me anubhoot ki jagah ananubhoot hona chahiye, kyonki chhand ki bhi yahi maang hai aur bhav ki bhi<br />nitya yugal hai hras vikas<br />girta rupya chhod abhi pahle girte mulyon ko tham<br /><br />ek ek pankti me poori poori kavita dikhi,samsaamyikya dikhi, udaatt bhawon ka swachhand prawah dikha,sarwhaara warg ki bhhokh pyas tooti aas dikhi,to burjua samajka beimann ullas dikha aur sabse badi baat kavita 2 me kavita jaisi mithaas dikhi, jo ki tatha kathit buddhiwad ke bhanwar me kahin gum si ho gayi hai aajkal<br />bas nhi dikha to angarhpan<br /><br />kavi hriday se hriday ke samvad me poorntah safal hai<br />paripakva kavitaa ke liye shesh sir ko badhaaai, tatha blogger ko prakashan ke liye dhanyawaad<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /> YOGESHWAR PANDEYAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4995179813337431693.post-90961564735638048932013-09-13T17:04:11.727+05:302013-09-13T17:04:11.727+05:30ek jagah shayad typing mistake hai
kavita 2 me an...ek jagah shayad typing mistake hai<br />kavita 2 me anubhoot ki jagah ananubhoot hona chahiye, kyonki chhand ki bhi yahi maang hai aur bhav ki bhi<br />nitya yugal hai hras vikas<br />girta rupya chhod abhi pahle girte mulyon ko tham<br /><br />ek ek pankti me poori poori kavita dikhi,samsaamyikya dikhi, udaat bhawon ka swachhand prawah dikha,sarwhaara warg ki bhhokh pyas tooti aas dikhi,to burjua samajka beimann ullas dikha aur sabse badi baat kavita 2 me kavita jaisi mithaas dikhi, jo ki tatha kathit buddhiwad ke bhanwar me kahin gum si ho gayi hai aajkal<br />bas nhi dikha to angarhpan<br /><br />kavi hriday se hriday ke samvad me poorntah safal hai<br />paripakva kavitaa ke liye shesh sir ko badhaaai, tatha blogger ko prakashan ke liye dhanyawaad<br /><br /><br /><br /><br /><br /> YOGESHWAR PANDEYAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com